I'm Liz (in case you couldn't tell by the username), and I am incredibly glad that I found this community. :D I literally just started writing this, and any feedback at all would be extremely helpful. Obviously, it's just the beginning, but I'm not sure where to go from here...

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Hey, I've never tried to write a story before, just poems and rants on LJ, so I'd appreciate some honest feedback on this, the beginning of a story I've been thinking about for a few weeks... I'm not sure I really have it in me to write something structured...

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Okay. The biggest complaint from my peers when the first story was read in class was that the ending was too abrupt. I filled in some of the story to give impact to the end.

Do you think it worked?

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Let's see if my cut skills have improved...

I am taking a class in Non-fiction Creative Writing. This is a copy of my first draft...

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I was finding it very difficult to focus on my duties. I was supposed to be preparing the Ship to exit the dimensional portal, but too much was on my mind ( Read more... )

I started a new writing project entitled "S'di's Adventure" for now (it's a very rough working title). Here's an excerpt ( Read more... )